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Is it your devil
that makes me smile?

Or your frivolous look
shrouded in the open
vespers of my bile?

Toward what ends do you
mean, oh devil,  that marks
my departure, your arrival?
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I gotta be honest. I don't know what this is about.

I kind of just strung a bunch of words together again :XD:


Although, in order to come up with a title, I decided that it might have something to do with deviousness.

Maybe?
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^3wyl Nov 2, 2009  Hobbyist Photographer
Even though you said you just strung a bunch of words together, the flow of this poem is just... awesome, aided by the rhyming and such. The words fit very well together in terms of pace and phrasing and I like how each stanza is a question too. :D
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Mood: Joy ~NapiCAN Nov 2, 2009  Student Filmographer
Oh man, thanks!
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